Blow Me Away ((TinRall))

[Abba]

They fall in line
One at a time, ready to play. I can't see them anyway

The raven-clad mare shifted her way through the forested area with a tiny flicking of her flints. It was an interesting rhythm to which she could allow her hips to sway. Her moon-colored mane and tail swished slightly in the breeze which she dealt with as it flew up against her pelt and cooled her down after a long day's travel. She needed rest, somewhere at least. But, the only thing she knew was that she could smell blood-lust and nothing else. It was screwing up her once calm demeanor that she had obtained on the cliff in the neutral areas. She closed her blue eyes for a minute as she shuffled farther and farther into the forest. It was getting cooler and cooler the farther into the shadows she went. Why was moving around in this heat so horrible. She just couldn't deal with it. Blame it on the black coat. Blame it on the black coat. That was what she would do. So, shifting quietly she paused in the middle area of the forest and closed her eyes, soaking up the shadows which surrounded her in such a disoriented fashion it it made her mane and tail a dark and messed up grey which she despised. It felt strange coming back here. She didn't prefer these lands to anything. But, she would deal with it. Yes, deal with it. So, she trudged onwards until she was as deep as she could go in the forest. As deep as she could go so that the shadows could take over her soul and she could calm down for a bit and get accustomed again to the scent of blood and death that cloaked these lands.

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---Into the Mind
. 347 words (or so)
. Urm. So. I'm... pretty much randomly working here on a computer screen which I can't really make anything out
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[saetta]

Tinrall was now three years old and so was now grown up and could do what he wanted. That was what he was doing now by flying through his fathers land or more like skies. He was scouting and so would report on any intruders that even thought they could sneak into his territory. Tinrall knew that his sire spent most of his time in the big clearing of the Zemlija. And so the seal bay hybrid was now looking the Kerryn. For any signs that someone was around that was not allowed. And there going between the lightly dispersed trees was another horse. And looking closed it was no Pegasus because of a lack of wings. That left either a Unicorn or a Kelpie or one of the crosses. And that is when Tinrall seen the horn so this was a fellow Unicorn. And it was not part of the kingdom or of his sires Estacar's herd. So Tinrall thought it would be good to fly out ahead then land and cut this stranger off. Before they got to far into his fathers territory. Now Tinrall was wondering if this was a stallion or a mare. He really did hate how his horn was all but useless for him. It bent left and then curled around his left ear just like a big horn sheep.

So he flew up ahead and in a small clearing in the path of this intruder. And so done a four point landing and folded his wings. Now it was time to follow and cut this stranger off. He then raised his head and sniffed the wind for this strangers scent. If it was a mare he could go confront them. But if it was a stallion then the 16.2 hh Tinrall would have to err on the side of caution. But maybe it was time for the hybrid to get his own little harem. Nothing crazy or approaching his sires herd in size. Just a mare or two to keep him entertained. And that is when he got a whiff of them and it was a mature mare. He now needed to see and know just where it was that they was heading to. He then galloped towards the same direction. And there off to his right was the mare. He then got close before rearing up and kicking his front legs wildly before settling back down. He then looked over the mare slowly making sure she was no cripple or sick. If this mare was going to be his he only wanted the best. And so in a low voice he spoke.

" Seems like you are a little off the beten path around here. You do know that you are in the Unicorn lands and my father is king of them. So got a reason that you are here mare. The name is Tinrall so do you have a name or would you like me to continue calling you mare."

Now if she did try running from Tinrall. He would just do like what he did now. that would be take to the air get ahead and cut her escape route off. So what would happen next was all up to what this mare would do now. Tinrall was ready for what ever she might pull on him.

[Abba]

Don't look down
Because it's easier falling from force. Just letting it take natures course

Raine heard the sound of flapping wings coming closer and closer. It just kept coming. And it was getting louder and louder until she finally heard this tiny thud, the landing of hooves. The hooves picking up speed as they went into a straight gallop, veering directly into her path. He brought his pillars up against his frame, lifting his front end up in such a graceful manner you wouldn't believe him to be as young as his body looked. He slashed them around, threateningly close to her skull and she backed up a couple of steps to stay out of striking range. What was he doing? Really? Were all stags in this land like this? And why was he in a purebred land when he was obviously a hybrid. Then, his low voice seemed to tremor into her ears and she watched him carefully as the words slowly formed in her head. " Seems like you are a little off the beaten path around here. You do know that you are in the Unicorn lands and my father is king of them. So got a reason that you are here mare. The name is Tinrall so do you have a name or would you like me to continue calling you mare." Mare? Mare? Really?! Oh, all of these stags were most definitely the same. With a snarl on her lips she snapped out towards him in annoyance, her ears pinned back a little. "You give me no reason to present you with my name, dearest Tinrall." she said, swishing her tail as she scratched her leg with her muzzle, allowing her horn to gleam in the tiny amount of light that flooded through the area. "And yes, these are the unicorn lands, and yes this is a bit far off of the beaten path. But, I've been traveling a while. So being away from other equines has been better." Then, she stopped, an amused snarl reaching her lips as she lifted her head up completely. "Your father is king? Darling. I think your father - if he is a pure-bred - would have disowned you already," she said before turning on her haunches and slowly beginning to leave the area her pearl locks sliding out behind her seductively as she picked up speed, not slowing down for any reason at all.

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---Into the mind
. 402 words
. Raine isn't amused. XD
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[saetta]

Tinrall was not in a mood to be toyed with for today. He should of digged his warning out and put it on for this troublesome mare. There was just something about her that screamed she was going to be more than a hand full for the young stallion. But Tinrall already had it in his head that he was going to start his herd today. And this mare was going to be his first member no matter what. So that is when she told him she had no reason to give out her name to him. Ok now it was on no holds barred style. Like Tinrall already said she either gave her name or she was going to be called mare as long as she belonged to him. Even if she gave it out later when common sense finally hit her. Then she finally dug her last insult towards the stag. When she said that if his father was a pure bred would have disowned him by now. And so she turned around and then started to gallop away from the seal brown hybrid. Ok so she really thought she could outrun him with so many trees in her way. She must of not had any idea that flying was always faster than running. And so Tinrall unfolded his black wings and took to the skies in pursuit of his prey down on the ground.


It didn't take much to get right on top of the fleeing mare. And then to stretch out a lead over her. And so for the second time the stallion landed and so cut off any escape for the mare. he then finally went up and so blocked her progress from Tinrall. He then let out a little evil laugh before narrowing his eyes and hissing out.

"You have a choice on this you can either be claimed by me or my father. You have a choice on this and so pick it now. And so are you going to give me a name or from here on out you are just mare to me. Even if you give me your name later on. Or I could also just pick an appropriate pet name for you dear. Ice witch the bitch comes to mind. So what is your name."

That is when Tinrall open his mouth and flashed his fangs to the mare. he then whinnied and then finished by saying.

" Or I could just fill you with a bunch of holes and poison. There is far worse fates than just being my mare dear. So you better come quietly. Now pick and be quick about it."

Now he finally hoped she would see the futility of trying to either escape or fight him any longer. But unlike his father Tinrall had only the fangs and no poison. He just added it so as to really come across as being dangerous and to add fear in this mares mind. He tried to come across as nice seems like she didn't like or wanted it. Tinrall was now just coming across as mean.